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turtlesoup) wrote2010-02-25 10:28 pm
turtlesoup) wrote2010-02-25 10:28 pm
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Turtle Soup: A Mighty Princess (part 1)
Finally, a new strip - my "little" brother's comic debut!
This happened some years back (when I was still in college, and he in high school - he's graduating college this year, it's terrifying). Our weird day did not end there, but the second part is going to have to wait until I find better reference images.
I am concerned about the second & third panels on this. :/ Portraying motion is difficult! Input would not go amiss, if you(?) have any.
This happened some years back (when I was still in college, and he in high school - he's graduating college this year, it's terrifying). Our weird day did not end there, but the second part is going to have to wait until I find better reference images.
I am concerned about the second & third panels on this. :/ Portraying motion is difficult! Input would not go amiss, if you(?) have any.
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DELIGHTFUL IN SEVERAL WAYS!
Hmm. I actually think you're portraying the motion quite well. It might come clearer if you gave it more page space or put it in the foreground. I think the motion itself is nicely rendered.
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Thanks, that's reassuring . . . also, hmm. The friend I was drawing with in a cafe this evening said something similar, about giving it larger space. Unfortunately, I don't think I can do that without entirely redoing the strip, but I guess I'll keep it in mind for the future! I guess the main thing is whether most viewers can tell what's going on.